Saturday, 8 December 2012

45 MINUTES OUT OF THE MOVIE “KINGDOM OF HEAVEN”


45 MINUTES OUT OF THE MOVIE “KINGDOM OF HEAVEN”

1:44-3.33
Because I feel like the part where the knights are cutting off Balian’s wife’s head, and burring her, doesn’t add much at all to the story. Through out the movie Kingdom of heaven, I found the story about his wife to be un- important except for when he kills the man in the black smith store that is wearing his wife’s necklace and visits him at work.  1.89

           
12:13-12:45
I think that the director doesn’t need to state how much of a fighter Balain is, because through out the movie, he definitely proves him self worthy of being a brave knight. This fight seen at the camp just adds on more to his character but I think it’s unnecessary. 32

23:11-24:08
 This scene doesn’t really add up to the movie. I don’t think it’s very important for Balain to have this conversation in the town with one of the potential kings. 1 37

27:31-29:41
 I think they could have cut out the shipwreck to Jerusalem, because it doesn’t add up to the movie. I found this part to be very confusing. In the next scene, Balain is traveling in the desert, so I think that people would just suspect that he already took some kind of transportation and now is walking to find it. 2 10

34:56-35:25
 Him walking along isn’t very important to the movie. 109

38:01-38:38
 when Balain was caring for the horse, I found it to be a bit boring because it didn’t add anything to the movie in my opinion. 37




41:39-42:27
This isn’t important to the film, because this character ends up being killed in the end, and I don’t think the director
should waste the movies valuable time elaborating on him, or this conversation. 128

44.55-46.02
I think that this isn’t that important to the story because the queen and Balain talk right after so it would seem as if dinner would finish then they have their conversation. 147


48.00-49.15
During this part, I feel like it is a bit of the king just rambling on, and it doesn’t really make that much sense near the end of his talk. I think the director should have just stopped the conversation there.
115
49:20-51.08
This part doesn’t need to be in the film, because it makes more sense when it just cuts to the next scene and goes from there. You don’t miss anything by taking it out. 188

53.10-54.35
 In this scene it is elaborating on how the queen and Balain like each other, but I think it’s un-important, because they already established this in the beginning. 125

55.28-56.24
To me, this is just almost footage that Riddley Scott put in to make the movie longer and more developed, but I think the movie would still be fine with out the conversation between the queen and Balain. 96

58.12-101.39
The fight scene is short and not very important so I think that they should have taken it out, and just started a new scene when the king said, “assemble the army”. 5min

102.24-103.40
I don’t really understand why this fight scene is in the movie because I feel like it doesn’t do anything to enhance the plot. I still feel like the director is just adding in more, and more fighting scenes to elongate the film. I do not think that this is a good idea.116

105.36-106.07
When the knights are running towards each other to fight, the running seems to last for forever, so I think by cutting it down it will capture people’s attention much longer. 71

109.37-110.30
This traveling scene takes too long and makes the viewers loose attention on the film. 93

112.03-113.55
This part of the movie really confuses me, because the man gets beaten by the king, for yelling remarks in the town. I just don’t see how this helps and characters or the plot. That is why I took it out.152

115.00-116.50
The talk between the two men is confusing, and again its just a way that the director is trying to make the movie more developed and longer.1.5

125.20-128.27
 This part of the movie involves another pointless fighting scene and I think that the director could have used these 3 or so minutes to elaborate more on the main character Balian’s life. I don’t like how he did this scene either because I feel like some of the camera angles are off.  307

130.19-132.40
I feel like they don’t have to have a talk before they go to war. I think they should have just gone straight to battle and not wasted any viewing time. 2.21

133.36-140.19

This part of the movie really confuses me, and I don’t think that it’s necessary to have it in. I like the idea of having to wait until the very end to have a giant fight scene rather than having so many in the middle that aren’t important for the story.  6.83


146.36-147.23
The scene is lasting to long when they are at battle so I think it should be cut down just by a couple of minutes. 87

150.47-152.48
There is too much of a battle scene, and I think that they could have taken out a couple of minutes of it just to make it a bit shorter. 201


155.13-156.22

I think that the battle scene again is way too long because after this point, its just getting repetitive and un interesting. 109




202.00-203.00

the scene is again lasting way too long and the camera angles were the only parts that were changing in this part of the movie. 100

209.35-211.05

This particular part isn’t very important to the scene, and they should have taken it out so that they could’ve gotten on with showing the town of Jerusalem being converted. 1.7




1 comment:

  1. This is just a list of scenes that you wish to remove but it needs to be accompanied by an explanation of what you are trying to achieve (how will the story be changed? What are you taking out and why? How does removing each of these affect the overall story?)

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